Fic: Loss. NC-17.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

The next fic in the Forwards arc. Links to the previous stories in the link. Spoilers for the book Backwards.

I feel fansmeggingtastic!

I apologize for posting these two seperately instead of as one. My computer was dying earlier today, and I didn't know I would find a happy replacement by tonight. I also apologize for the content of the thing - if you like fluffy, this isn't. As always, concrit welcome, no politeness required.

Comments

[laurenthemself]

I should have been reading this right from the start, but for some reason hadn't. I've now read the whole arc, and am soundly cursing myself for not having read it sooner. Smegging brilliant.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

*blush* Thank you!

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

Ahaha~ Yes! The direction is still fun =P

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, good! :D Glad you still like.

[shivvlan.livejournal.com]

Heh; how could I not?
I have an obsene amount of faith in your ability to plot well.

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

You evil, you!
I can't help but read this, even though I haven't read the book. Damn.
That was increible. I can't really be any more specific that this.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

The book is pretty dark and twisted, and I wanted to try to capture a little of that. It's worth reading, but I'd have Last Human on standby to make you feel a bit better after reading it. :p

Thankee for the feedback!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

*speechless*

Damn. I had detailed comments, but wow... That's probably the most intense thing I've read since forever.

*needs to go have a quiet lie-down*

Damn.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Awww... *hug* Sorry it necessitated a lie-down!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

In a good way. :)

It didn't make me feel all that bad, really, because I understand Lister, and I just feel he will come around.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Ja - after all, it's canon that Red Dwarf is a love story across time, space, death, and reality!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

*giggle* Reh-ah-leh-teh! That is such a great line. It's the delivery.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Yes, it's so wonderfully delivered. And my slashy mind won't let go of the fact that it's a love story across death and reality...

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

*glares* Fecking Lister ... Fecking stupid ... GAAHHH!

Feck, that was intense. Intense and a half. Oh, how you handled Rimmer's ability to touch again was absolutely brilliant. And the shagging ... And then fecking Lister. Bloody fecking ... *cough*. You warned me ...

Oh ... *hugs Rimmer tightly* ...

I'm going to go now and hide ...

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Thanks, ma'am!

Ach, that's why I wanted to write Gay and Burst before going into the sex. Lister does have some justification for feeling very conflicted. And - well, he's still half-teenager. :p