Fic: Celebration. NC-17.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

The next fic in the Forwards arc. Links to previous fics at the top of this one. Spoilers for the book Backwards.

Yeh... want this?

Crit always good.

Comments

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Excelent!

He thought about it for a moment, and assumed Blank And Condescending #6 - eyes narrowed, line of lips broken with a slight purse, two horizontal lines in the brow

Oh, yes indeedy!

He wished the grotty, filthy, arrogant bastard did not evoke a feeling in him that was far too disturbingly close to what he had heard described as love

Hmm, what was that? The sound of my heart breaking? Why do you do this to me?!
I love the details of the song at the start there (produce?). And I love the detail of the...um...yeah....
Please say there will be more? I mean, it can't end here, can it?

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Awww, sorry. :( I don't plan on ending it here...

Thankee for feedback!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Oh, lovely, lovely, lovely! And quite good for a first time, knowing Arn. I know him so well now that I just don't expect him to be comfortable, much less happy with a first (or second) sexual encounter. Detailed comment later, because Sindre is yelling at me to get up out of bed, and even started reading the story in an annyoing voice, making up words ("He hacked (and slashed)") alound over my shoulder (until he got disturbed and wandered off), so I think I should do so. ;)

Hurrah!

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

until he got disturbed and wandered off

Ha! I can just imagine!

Yes, he did deal with it... not as dysfunctionally as he could have. Of course, this Rimmer has the previous 'doings' with the parallel Lister, and also The Event, so it isn't completely novel. But dealing with the reality that this Lister is a different person, and a stronger person than 'his' Lister - that's quite a blow to a pile of smeg like Rimmer.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Here we go then:

Silk pajamas!

He thought about it for a moment, and assumed Blank And Condescending #6
You know, I'll bet money Chris have these named, numbered and written down somewhere.

about finding naked women in a variety of implausible places in the space of an otherwise normal day, and having bits of produce on hand just by happy chance.
Laugh-out-loud moment.

I'm sure I can rig up a catapult...
Not a trebuchet?

"Y'all righ'?"
*facebed* Oh, for feck's sake Dave, get a grip! You want a stern talking talking to in Norwegian?

all he could think to be annoyed about was the thought of who Lister might be thinking of
*sigh* I don't know, Arn. He was STARING at you. Didn't you notice? Why was that, you think?

no way in Jupiter's hurricane
I liked that.

the one who he could not stand to have despise him as much as the man did.
*hugs Arn* It's OK. I know him. It'll be OK.

And the sex... Whoah. Sex. Yes. *fans self* Intensely good! As is this story. :)

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

You know, I'll bet money Chris have these named, numbered and written down somewhere.

I know! As someone mentioned, he's a bit... er... you know.


Not a trebuchet?

Lister was too drunk to build one.


I don't know, Arn. He was STARING at you. Didn't you notice? Why was that, you think?

Ach, it's Rimmer...


I liked that.

I originally wrote it as no way in the Great Red Spot, but it just read wrong. :p

*blush* Thankee, ma'am!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

he's a bit... er... you know.
Goooooorrrrgeous? *ahem* Sorry, a little VIII-induced madness there.

And yeah, that sounds vaguely erotic, doesn't it? "Oooh, let me touch your red spot, baby..." Now that's planet sex!

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

Whee!!!

He wished the grotty, filthy, arrogant bastard did not evoke a feeling in him that was far too disturbingly close to what he had heard described as love

Wahhhhh! *looks at clock* Gahhh! Workies :) Very lovely, hun.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Ha! Go to work! ;) Thanks, glad you liked.