Fic: Return, part 2. PG.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Part 2 of many. Link to previous in the fic. Spoilers for the whole TV show.

"Go out, do some heroics, shag some women."

Crit is always good.

Comments

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

*galres*
Well, well, well...*taps foot*
You have gone and killed Rimmer! Again!

After all, he never asked why Lister had been so oddly tender, back on the psi-moon, and the closeness he displayed had never been repeated, not even after Horde had given Rimmer the hard-light drive

Horde... *snort* I see you used the oportunity to make some changes.... And of course the misunderstandings between yet another Rimmer and Lister go on.
Lovely echo of the death scene in SMAC.

Rimmer looked at the empty suit, and at the wig on the floor. He tapped his lip with his forefinger. Shagging women, eh?

He really is Rimmer, isn't he?
There better be many more. I'm very cross I'll have you know.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

*meep* Ja, I never got the "plays well with others" comment. ;)

They don't speak the same language - it would be an odd dimension, indeed, where they did! I get the feeling that even Ace and Spanners mucked it up.

Yes, he is! I'm writing! *does so* There's something coming that might uncross you. Or it might not. We'll see.

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

I'm watching you.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

If it helps, er, Kahvi and I plotted today on how to reconcile Lister's not-dating Kochanski in I/II with his having-dated-her afterwards... it'll be... a kinda happyfic.

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Wow, reconciling one of the shows biggest couninuty issues! I'm impressed. This I have to read.

[day221b.livejournal.com]

Ack!! Echoes eviltigerlily. You killed Rimmer! What were you thinking?! Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oops! I feel like I'm in South Park. You bastard! You killed Rimmer! Er, one more Rimmer. Well, you can judge with where it goes...

[day221b.livejournal.com]

Well, I have a feeling I know where its going so I'm holding off the throwing of stones at present. :D As for South Park, I almost said that, but didn't know how you'd take it, so I restrained myself. :D Good luck with the next chapter.

[zekkass.livejournal.com]

Oh dear. You went and killed him. Well, if it's in the name of finally getting a Rimmer right, go ahead. Just don't let this one smeg things up again.

Horde. XD You rock.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Does Rimmer ever get it right? *meep*

*blush* Danke!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

"Well, yes. How else am I supposed to stay alive?"
He has a point, you know.

Yes, you'll die, and pretty smegging soon at that, but is it really worse than creeping through your afterlife on a grotty lander with people - and I use that term very loosely - who don't even smegging want you around?
*sob*

*sigh*

*grumble*

Hehehe... Much love, dear. But you know me. ;)

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Yes... I think I'd end up acting more like him than like Ace, in situations of heroism! :p

Ach, yes, thanks. But you're always welcome to make better. :)

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

I won't say I haven't had ideas. I don't want it to be trite or contrived though. I'll have to mull it over a bit more. But I'm thinking about it.

Meanwhile, I have an alternate version of "Ace Returns" in the works. ;)