Fic: The Holo-men, part 1 of 2. PG.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

With apologies to T.S. Eliot for the title, and thanks to kahvi for the idea. Yes, this is The Fluffy Fic I owe her.

"What is it, Kryten? Did the iron stop working?"

Crit is always good. Written for fanfic100. Little Damn Table.

Comments

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

Oh, gods this is wonderful! Can't wait to see how it turns out. Absolutely great Rimmer in this. Even better then ussual. And great Kryten too.

Especially when he had a tube of superglue in reserve that would give that inferior quite a surprise when he next plugged into his recharge socket.

Oh, the mental images. Why does that make me think of DNA? OK, i can't get it out of my head now.

He dusted her for fingerprints every night, but Lister could be devious

Wonderful beyond words. It probably shouldn't make me as happy as it does. Well, it is a great pairing. And when we bring in the love triangle dynamic....

The last line was just brialiant. Completely unexpected (in spite of it beeing obvious) and toatally hilarious.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Aww, thanks! Rimmer's talking to me rather a lot today. I don't know if that's a good thing, but I'll take it while it's going...

"The lead just keeps falling out!" I think Kryten is at his best in DNA.

Oh, yes, love triangle! *giggle* Only in RD could the last human being alive be involved in a love triangle.

[thoraarwin.livejournal.com]

Ah, you have me captivated, can't wait for part 2!*g* Great writing as always. It's wonderful how you can get into their heads- all their thoughts and actions seem so natural, in-character. Can't wait to see what's wrong with Lister!:-)

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

*blush* Thanks!

Well, Kat gave me the bunny, and it makes a lot of sense - he does get thinner and more pensive from VI to VII.

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Yay! I've been looking forward to this - I chose something I knew you'd write particularly well, and I was not dissapointed.

Patton, Rimmer thought desperately, did not have to deal with such things.
*snigger*

Fantastic Kryten. I love how you write him, and this is excellent. The whole carrot thing... *giggles*

I even whipped up a lager vindaloo last night.
You know, those things aren't half bad.

Rimmer/Rachel love

He dusted her for fingerprints every night,
I seriously fell off the couch. People in neighbouring apartments worried.

and Rachel's open-mouthed astonishment
So wrong, yet so right.

Perfect use of "Aliens!"

I can't wait for the rest of this... Thank you! :D

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

The lager vindaloo scares me, but I don't like lager. I'll put copious red wine and/or vodka in sauces, but I don't know if either would work with Indian food. Maybe the vodka. :p

Rimmer and Rachel are so good together, aren't they? Well, that's what Rimmer thinks.

Yikes, get a seatbelt for that couch!

Thank ye! I'm glad you like it. :D

[zekkass.livejournal.com]

Aliens! Bwahahahahahaha!

*dashes over to next part*