[identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] reddwarfslash
With apologies to T.S. Eliot for the title, and thanks to [livejournal.com profile] kahvi for the idea. Yes, this is The Fluffy Fic I owe her.

"What is it, Kryten? Did the iron stop working?"

Crit is always good. Written for [livejournal.com profile] fanfic100. Little Damn Table.

Date: 2006-09-11 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eviltigerlily.livejournal.com
Oh, gods this is wonderful! Can't wait to see how it turns out. Absolutely great Rimmer in this. Even better then ussual. And great Kryten too.

Especially when he had a tube of superglue in reserve that would give that inferior quite a surprise when he next plugged into his recharge socket.

Oh, the mental images. Why does that make me think of DNA? OK, i can't get it out of my head now.

He dusted her for fingerprints every night, but Lister could be devious

Wonderful beyond words. It probably shouldn't make me as happy as it does. Well, it is a great pairing. And when we bring in the love triangle dynamic....

The last line was just brialiant. Completely unexpected (in spite of it beeing obvious) and toatally hilarious.

Date: 2006-09-11 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thoraarwin.livejournal.com
Ah, you have me captivated, can't wait for part 2!*g* Great writing as always. It's wonderful how you can get into their heads- all their thoughts and actions seem so natural, in-character. Can't wait to see what's wrong with Lister!:-)

Date: 2006-09-11 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
Yay! I've been looking forward to this - I chose something I knew you'd write particularly well, and I was not dissapointed.

Patton, Rimmer thought desperately, did not have to deal with such things.
*snigger*

Fantastic Kryten. I love how you write him, and this is excellent. The whole carrot thing... *giggles*

I even whipped up a lager vindaloo last night.
You know, those things aren't half bad.

Rimmer/Rachel love

He dusted her for fingerprints every night,
I seriously fell off the couch. People in neighbouring apartments worried.

and Rachel's open-mouthed astonishment
So wrong, yet so right.

Perfect use of "Aliens!"

I can't wait for the rest of this... Thank you! :D

Date: 2006-09-25 02:05 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] zekkass.livejournal.com
Aliens! Bwahahahahahaha!

*dashes over to next part*

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