[identity profile] roadstergal.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] reddwarfslash
This has been nagging at me ever since I saw Back In The Red. 500-word vignette. Spoilers up through BITR. Crit is always welcome.


The sexual magnetism virus had a smegging potent smell. It was kinda cherry-like - but not real cherries. It was like cherry-flavored cough syrup, that artificial, full-of-alcohol, too-sweet, Red Coloring #14 cherry-crap smell. Went straight to your groin, though, it did. Like there was a string between your nose and your cock, and as soon as you got yerself a whiff, it jerked up and gave you a stiffy you could pound nails with. Not just that, though; there was a kind of desire there, too, a wantin' to get your hands on that other person and kiss him senseless, feel his tongue in your mouth, satisfy him with your hands or your arse or whatever else would get him off, like his pleasure was the whole point of the universe, and your own excitement just a tangent. Hard to resist. I could feel that Kochanski wasn't resistin' at all; she was hot and sweaty as she tugged at my arms. She was just achin' for that smeghead, and I knew that she was wantin' to do to him just what I was burnin' to do to him, too. I knew that if I had let both of us go, we woulda done it in concert, however it would have worked, not carin' at all that the other was there as long as he was happy.

Yeah, him. Smeghead. Just like that bastard used to be, before death and psi-moons and worlds of clones and all of the other things that made him realize he was a bastard, and made him be less of one. Smeg, it made him almost a decent human being. He wouldn't've used that virus like that, nossir. Not the Arnold Rimmer I helped on his way to bein' a Space Hero.

Not that he would have had to.

Kochanski asked me later, after I had played that prank with the rest of the virus - and maybe it was wrong, but damn, I needed to take him down a peg. She asked why I was immune to it. I just told her the truth - I'm not - and let her wonder. Yeh see, I've had practice. Lots of it. Sittin' around with a hard-on, wantin' to do things to him I never thought I would want to do to anyone, let alone him. Practice makes perfect, I guess; practice at desirin' and not takin', practice at giggling and grinnin' and making mean jokes when yer on fire. Sure, it's not the same man, but he looks so much like him - from his stupid polished boots to his ridiculous curly hair - that it was easy to pretend he was, and resist.

Kochanski just shrugged and said yeh can build up an immunity to any virus, if you're exposed long enough. She doesn't know how right she is.

Date: 2006-09-13 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beetle-breath.livejournal.com
Oooh ooh, I love the way you wrote this! From the perspective of a slasher, the introduction of the original Rimmer would do a helluva number on Lister.

And yet they're always together. Even nekkid in front of Hollister.

Date: 2006-09-14 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] day221b.livejournal.com
D*mn that was good.

Date: 2006-09-14 05:08 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] laurenthemself
*wibbles*

Nice one.

Date: 2006-09-14 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
Nice VIII-Lister, all dark and almost on the verge of cynical. He's in such a bad place, the poor dear...

before death and psi-moons and worlds of clones and all of the other things that made him realize he was a bastard
Lovely.

Not the Arnold Rimmer I helped on his way to bein' a Space Hero.
*headdesk*

Not that he would have had to.
Gah.

practice at giggling and grinnin' and making mean jokes when yer on fire.
Yep. You nailed it.

The last two paragraphs are some damn fine writing indeed, ma'am. Great concept, and I think you are absolutely right.

Date: 2006-09-14 10:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
Just a minor thought though; while I love the idea of the virus making you want to pleasure the infected person, I'm not entirely sure how that fits into canon, given the behavior of the female officers towards Rimmer in BITR... er... I forget which part. They did seem, at least to my eyes, to be more focused on their own pleasure. I hate to say this, because it's such a good idea, but I just wanted to put it out there. Posting it here, hope you don't mind. :)

Date: 2006-09-14 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
I thought someone was going to bring up that Hollister wasn't affected. ;)
Oh dear, now I have *that* mental image in my head...

You know, this seems like one of those things were there is no norm. Though maybe that's it; maybe people react individually. And you know, there's always Spanners and his Ace-resistance... Ties into this, methinks! ;)

Date: 2006-09-14 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
I know I've said it before, but this is so my Lister/VIII Rimmer song: http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/keane/wemightaswellbestrangers.html

Date: 2006-09-14 08:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eviltigerlily.livejournal.com
That was.... *is speechless*

Um, yes. Good, yes.

Date: 2006-09-14 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tawg.livejournal.com
The idea of building an immunity - to Rimmer - was just great.

But I also really liked the way you worked with Kochanski. I really hated the way that - in the show - Lister was all over her, because - like new!Rimmer - it's not the same Kochanski, not the real one. I think, if there had been more moments like this, of them sharing an experience and not exactly understanding one another, that attraction would have made more sense.

Plus the whole almost!Rimmer aspect is one I love seeing played with.

Date: 2006-09-14 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] squiggle-bat.livejournal.com
Okay, I *need* to watch series 8 soon. The altruistic effect of the magnetism virus is a fasincating idea, and the reason for Lister's tolerance feels painfully in character.

Date: 2006-09-14 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kahvi.livejournal.com
Because then all the fangirls would explode, and DVD-sales would plummet.

(Personally, I wouldn't have minded a little exploding to get that.)

Date: 2006-09-25 02:19 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] zekkass.livejournal.com
Y'know, I always wondered about that scene, and you've gone and found the perfect explaination. Thank you!

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