Fic: Heat. PG.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

The next fic in the Forwards arc. Spoilers for the book Backwards.

You're a lovely slavering monster, I'm sure...

Crit is always welcome.

Comments

[lady-draco.livejournal.com]

Ficcage!!!

That was goodly *nods*. The whole arm biting bit was met with an "eek!" from me. But it's healing so that is good.

"We're doomed," Rimmer moaned.

Threepio? Is that you hiding in Rimmer?

Rimmer closed his eyes. "I... care about you, you know."

*sigh*

Good work, lovey.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank ye! *blush*

Heh, I was thinking of "We're finished!!" in Pete.

[eviltigerlily.livejournal.com]

*coughsoftlightcough* Oh, never mind....

Poor Rimmer, why is it he always gets bits od himself detached in a rather violent manner in fics? The ending was just so sweet... Why does it take impending domm, why?!

Oh, er, wait! You're a lovely slavering monster, I'm sure, but no doing on the whole eating thing... nobody samples my juicy flesh on the first night out...

Whee! love.

The first guard flashed his beady black eyes up at the grey sky. "Uneducated peasant,"

How lovely. I love how you write creatures.

Buddy, I can barely cope with the idea of these things being on me! And you want me to put them in my mouth?"

I like that, because I can practiaclly hear it. Great Cat overall btw.
As for the planet... Is the Yeti things idea for a fiery hell a wee bit different the ours... mmm... perhaps... maybe...

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Ja... I wasn't really sure how to communicate that one, actually. In TV-verse, Rimmer got a little addition to his bee from Legion, and they imply in Gunmen and Rimmerworld that he can flip between hard and soft at will. In this-verse, I had Rimmer get a completely different bee, and I meant for him to be permanently hard-light. Thing is, I didn't think that any of the three would actually think of the idea of going to soft-light to have it shot down...

"You bastard! You killed Rimmer!" Well, Kat and I were talking about how Rob and Doug seem to like to torture Rimmer. ;)

Aww, thank you muchly!


(And sssh.)

[tawg.livejournal.com]

I really liked Rimmer's last minute appology/confession/icky emotional talk. And the yetis. The Yetis were great.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Yes, they are icky... *shakes head* But he was feeling a bit icky.

Hee, thanks! I do like the Yetifolk.