Fic: Back - R/L - NC-17 - part 1 of 6

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Title: Back - part 1 of 6
Authors: roadstergal and kahvi
Pairings: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: NC-17, for explicit sex and adult themes. Please note this.
Disclaimer: We do not own them, and we make no money from this. Just a whole lot of fun!
Note: Yes, it's Gestalt-time! This story follows on from, and is based in the same universe as my Heart, and roadstergal's Annoyance and The Way. You may wish to read those first. :)

No way in Hades had Kryten sounded Vaguely Brownish-Purple Alert for a shower.

Comments

Re: Better Late then Never. :)

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

I don't mean to sound unapreciative, but as roadstergal said, we did make this editing choice conciously, and I would prefer to keep it that way. Your comments are apreciated, and we will keep them in mind for future fics however, so thanks!

Re: Better Late then Never. :)

[typhonblue.livejournal.com]

No, you can take the crit or leave it. That's the nature of crit.

I reworked it in order to figure out what was bothering me so I could explain.