and then they done sex...
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reddwarfslashOk ladies, I think re-reading all the goodies here has had a good bad influence on me.
I've committed Fan-fiction.
Author: Me :)
Pairing: Lister/Rimmer
Rating: NC-17 (18, I'm English Damn-it!!)
Spoilers: Not really, take place after Legion
Disclaimer: If they were mine then... *Drifts of to her happy place* :D
Notes: My first Non Angst!fic. Also my first Sex scene 0_0. This was written on the fly as the idea occurred to me just today. Concrit welcome.
~~~
It had been a long and stressful day and all Rimmer could think of was slipping into a nice hot shower, or perhaps a nice hot Lister. He smiled wryly at this thought as he glanced over at his lover, the younger man looked just as stressed as the hologram. He wanted to take him straight back to their quarters, but Kryten had insisted that the living human should eat something first, so Rimmer waited.
After dinner Rimmer lead a weary Lister to their bunk room and sat him at the table and started to rub his shoulders, "Not tonight Arnie, man. I'm whacked."
"David!" said Rimmer, with mock indignation "I'm hurt. Do you really think I'm giving you this relaxing shoulder massage purely to get inside your longjohns?"
"Yeah." declared Lister with a feint grin, "Besides I reek man, I should sort me self out."
"Oooo Listy, you read my mind. I think I nice hot shower will do us both the world of good," Lister started to turn to protest "and think of it logically, If we shower together it will save on water supplies." Rimmer concluded.
So they showered together, gently at first as Rimmer had no wish to exacerbate Lister aching muscles, but as he washed his shoulders he felt Lister relax under his hands and so lent forward to kiss him. The human responded with more energy than the hologram had expected, not that he was complaining of course, so much so that by the time they eventually got out of the shower both men were, almost, fully relaxed and ready for what other the other had in mind.
Rimmer guided them over to the closest bunk and started to dry Listers plaits speaking softly as he did, "Dave, you know how, ever since we got together, you've been encouraging me to try new things?" Lister gave an affirmative moan, "Well," Rimmer continued "There's something I've sort of been experimenting with something that I think could prove interesting for both of us, but..." He halted slightly, Lister nodded for him to continue "But If I get it wrong, it could hurt you. A lot." at this Lister turned in his lovers arms, which allowed Rimmer the chance to dry his chest, the caramel skin glistening invitingly in front of him.
"Arnold, I know you. Despite all your smegheaded goitiness I don't believe you would ever hurt me, even accidentally. Not if you can help it," He pulled Rimmers chin up to look at him, Chocolate eyes meeting deep hazel, "I trust ya man, what ever it is you want to try, then I'm willing." With that he kissed him gently on the lips and smiled as he pulled away, "So, where do you want me?"
"On the bed will be fine, you need to be on your stomach, I mean it may work in other positions, but for the first time I think face down will be, ah, safest."
They stood up and laid a fresh towel on the bunk and started to kiss and caress each other until they until they where both fully aroused again. Lister then lay himself across the towel as Rimmer got the lube, as he straddled the younger man and started to prep him he asked again if he was sure "Yes Rimmer, I'm sure," he responded in a slightly frustrated tone, and then more gently, "Please." With that Rimmer thrust in, Lister winced slightly but the moment quickly passed as Rimmer rocked back and forth slowly allowing them both to enjoy the feeling.
"Listy, are you ok? Not uncomfortable are you?"
"It's been a long time since this was uncomfortable."
"No I mean can you hold this position?"
Lister turned his head slightly, "Ehhh?"
"I need for you to be in a position you can comfortably hold."
Lister was confused by this but complied with out further argument "Ok."
Rimmer moved himself so that his arms were both planted solidly either side of Lister, he whispered into his ear, "Ready?" The Scouser nodded.
Lister was confused, he had no idea what possible trick Rimmer had in mind that would require him to be filled to the hilt and then forced to hold still, "Ready?" Rimmer whispered in his ear, He nodded and then nothing. He felt nothing, want to turn in surprise but Rimmer had forbade it, so he resisted and simply concentrated on the non-feeling, and then he felt it. The soft Static like energy field that marked Rimmers soft-light body. So that was it, he switched. The Hologram was fully inside him and yet barely tangible, somehow the thought of this made Lister even harder and he moaned in pleasure.
As soon as Lister had nodded his consent Rimmer switched to soft-light, It took most of his concentration to not fall through Lister and he swore he felt him flinch slightly but Lister was good to his word and held still. Rimmer stayed in position for a moment to fully experience the non-feeling. It was strange, but not unpleasant, he had always had a vague awareness of solid objects, which allowed him to not accidentally pass through them, but that was a cold clinical feeling, not like now, Lister was warm. He suddenly became aware of Listers moan and switched back. The Feeling was instant, The heat of Listers flesh, the softness of his skin, the slight tremble of his muscles and the tightness of his arse around Rimmers cock, then his voice.
"Smeeeeg Rimmeh! Where the hell did you learn that?" Lister asked as he glanced suspiciously in the direction of Rachels deflated form.
"It was ok?" Rimmer asked cautiously
"Ok. It's un-be-smegging-leavable!"
"More?"
"Oh yes please." said Lister as he got back into the comfortable position, "ok."
At that Rimmer switched again, the Non-feeling contrasting beautifully with the feeling of heat and tightness, switching back and forth in a rhythm that seemed to work for both of them.
Lister held tight as Rimmer switched from hard to soft-light, over and over all around him and inside, The feeling was incredible. One moment full the next empty, but not quite, it was like being pumped from the inside. His muscles were being worked in ways he didn't know were possible. His prostate was being stimulated in new and fantastic ways, his only regret at that point was that there was no way he could return the favour to Rimmer.
Rimmer was close now, he could feel his orgasm building inside him, he was concerned for Lister though, in order to do this safely neither of them had been able to pay any attention to the humans erection and Rimmer had prided himself on them being able to come together and now they wouldn't. "Dave..." He started his voice straining from the effort.
"It's ok man," Lister panted "Let go." With that he switched back to hard-light and let his orgasm overtake him. it was incredible, he felt the waves of pleasure wash over him and as he arched his back Lister was able to reach down to his aching member and shortly joined his lover in their shared ecstasy.
Rimmer pulled out allowing Lister to turn and face him, for a couple of minute neither man spoke as they caught their breath. They just looked at one another, panting, sweating. Glowing.
Lister looked up at his bunk-mate, his face splitting into one of his biggest, happiest grins, "Tha' was 'ncredible." He slurred, the stress of the day and the activity of the evening finally catching up with him. Rimmer looked down at him and smiled shyly "Thanks Listy."
Rimmer got up briefly to get the duvet from the other bunk, as he got back in and wrapped it around them both Lister cuddled up to him, "Ni' Arn." he managed before letting sleep take him over.
"Goodnight Dave." Said Rimmer as he Kissed him softly on the forehead.
~Fin~
There it is, I hope you liked.
yeah.
Merry Christmas.
Phe
I've committed Fan-fiction.
Author: Me :)
Pairing: Lister/Rimmer
Rating: NC-17 (18, I'm English Damn-it!!)
Spoilers: Not really, take place after Legion
Disclaimer: If they were mine then... *Drifts of to her happy place* :D
Notes: My first Non Angst!fic. Also my first Sex scene 0_0. This was written on the fly as the idea occurred to me just today. Concrit welcome.
~~~
It had been a long and stressful day and all Rimmer could think of was slipping into a nice hot shower, or perhaps a nice hot Lister. He smiled wryly at this thought as he glanced over at his lover, the younger man looked just as stressed as the hologram. He wanted to take him straight back to their quarters, but Kryten had insisted that the living human should eat something first, so Rimmer waited.
After dinner Rimmer lead a weary Lister to their bunk room and sat him at the table and started to rub his shoulders, "Not tonight Arnie, man. I'm whacked."
"David!" said Rimmer, with mock indignation "I'm hurt. Do you really think I'm giving you this relaxing shoulder massage purely to get inside your longjohns?"
"Yeah." declared Lister with a feint grin, "Besides I reek man, I should sort me self out."
"Oooo Listy, you read my mind. I think I nice hot shower will do us both the world of good," Lister started to turn to protest "and think of it logically, If we shower together it will save on water supplies." Rimmer concluded.
So they showered together, gently at first as Rimmer had no wish to exacerbate Lister aching muscles, but as he washed his shoulders he felt Lister relax under his hands and so lent forward to kiss him. The human responded with more energy than the hologram had expected, not that he was complaining of course, so much so that by the time they eventually got out of the shower both men were, almost, fully relaxed and ready for what other the other had in mind.
Rimmer guided them over to the closest bunk and started to dry Listers plaits speaking softly as he did, "Dave, you know how, ever since we got together, you've been encouraging me to try new things?" Lister gave an affirmative moan, "Well," Rimmer continued "There's something I've sort of been experimenting with something that I think could prove interesting for both of us, but..." He halted slightly, Lister nodded for him to continue "But If I get it wrong, it could hurt you. A lot." at this Lister turned in his lovers arms, which allowed Rimmer the chance to dry his chest, the caramel skin glistening invitingly in front of him.
"Arnold, I know you. Despite all your smegheaded goitiness I don't believe you would ever hurt me, even accidentally. Not if you can help it," He pulled Rimmers chin up to look at him, Chocolate eyes meeting deep hazel, "I trust ya man, what ever it is you want to try, then I'm willing." With that he kissed him gently on the lips and smiled as he pulled away, "So, where do you want me?"
"On the bed will be fine, you need to be on your stomach, I mean it may work in other positions, but for the first time I think face down will be, ah, safest."
They stood up and laid a fresh towel on the bunk and started to kiss and caress each other until they until they where both fully aroused again. Lister then lay himself across the towel as Rimmer got the lube, as he straddled the younger man and started to prep him he asked again if he was sure "Yes Rimmer, I'm sure," he responded in a slightly frustrated tone, and then more gently, "Please." With that Rimmer thrust in, Lister winced slightly but the moment quickly passed as Rimmer rocked back and forth slowly allowing them both to enjoy the feeling.
"Listy, are you ok? Not uncomfortable are you?"
"It's been a long time since this was uncomfortable."
"No I mean can you hold this position?"
Lister turned his head slightly, "Ehhh?"
"I need for you to be in a position you can comfortably hold."
Lister was confused by this but complied with out further argument "Ok."
Rimmer moved himself so that his arms were both planted solidly either side of Lister, he whispered into his ear, "Ready?" The Scouser nodded.
Lister was confused, he had no idea what possible trick Rimmer had in mind that would require him to be filled to the hilt and then forced to hold still, "Ready?" Rimmer whispered in his ear, He nodded and then nothing. He felt nothing, want to turn in surprise but Rimmer had forbade it, so he resisted and simply concentrated on the non-feeling, and then he felt it. The soft Static like energy field that marked Rimmers soft-light body. So that was it, he switched. The Hologram was fully inside him and yet barely tangible, somehow the thought of this made Lister even harder and he moaned in pleasure.
As soon as Lister had nodded his consent Rimmer switched to soft-light, It took most of his concentration to not fall through Lister and he swore he felt him flinch slightly but Lister was good to his word and held still. Rimmer stayed in position for a moment to fully experience the non-feeling. It was strange, but not unpleasant, he had always had a vague awareness of solid objects, which allowed him to not accidentally pass through them, but that was a cold clinical feeling, not like now, Lister was warm. He suddenly became aware of Listers moan and switched back. The Feeling was instant, The heat of Listers flesh, the softness of his skin, the slight tremble of his muscles and the tightness of his arse around Rimmers cock, then his voice.
"Smeeeeg Rimmeh! Where the hell did you learn that?" Lister asked as he glanced suspiciously in the direction of Rachels deflated form.
"It was ok?" Rimmer asked cautiously
"Ok. It's un-be-smegging-leavable!"
"More?"
"Oh yes please." said Lister as he got back into the comfortable position, "ok."
At that Rimmer switched again, the Non-feeling contrasting beautifully with the feeling of heat and tightness, switching back and forth in a rhythm that seemed to work for both of them.
Lister held tight as Rimmer switched from hard to soft-light, over and over all around him and inside, The feeling was incredible. One moment full the next empty, but not quite, it was like being pumped from the inside. His muscles were being worked in ways he didn't know were possible. His prostate was being stimulated in new and fantastic ways, his only regret at that point was that there was no way he could return the favour to Rimmer.
Rimmer was close now, he could feel his orgasm building inside him, he was concerned for Lister though, in order to do this safely neither of them had been able to pay any attention to the humans erection and Rimmer had prided himself on them being able to come together and now they wouldn't. "Dave..." He started his voice straining from the effort.
"It's ok man," Lister panted "Let go." With that he switched back to hard-light and let his orgasm overtake him. it was incredible, he felt the waves of pleasure wash over him and as he arched his back Lister was able to reach down to his aching member and shortly joined his lover in their shared ecstasy.
Rimmer pulled out allowing Lister to turn and face him, for a couple of minute neither man spoke as they caught their breath. They just looked at one another, panting, sweating. Glowing.
Lister looked up at his bunk-mate, his face splitting into one of his biggest, happiest grins, "Tha' was 'ncredible." He slurred, the stress of the day and the activity of the evening finally catching up with him. Rimmer looked down at him and smiled shyly "Thanks Listy."
Rimmer got up briefly to get the duvet from the other bunk, as he got back in and wrapped it around them both Lister cuddled up to him, "Ni' Arn." he managed before letting sleep take him over.
"Goodnight Dave." Said Rimmer as he Kissed him softly on the forehead.
~Fin~
There it is, I hope you liked.
yeah.
Merry Christmas.
Phe
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Date: 2007-12-24 07:41 pm (UTC)I love Established Relationship Rimsy and Listy love one another fics and there are soooo feeeewwww of theeeem!
I LOVED it!
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Date: 2007-12-24 10:19 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Merry Chris-mas
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Date: 2007-12-29 03:59 am (UTC)Here's a bit of concrit for you, since you asked... food-metaphors are over done in sex scenes.
"Chocolate eyes meeting deep hazel" breaks out of the PoV, which is Rimmer's. (Rimmer can't observe his own eyes observing Lister's.)
Just a thought, but a title that somehow suggests whats going on in the story, something related to the novelty of the sex act might introduce the piece better.
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Date: 2007-12-29 04:38 pm (UTC)Why the hesitation before hot?
"Chocolate eyes meeting deep hazel"
Yeah I see what your saying, it is a bit cliché, How about...
And their gazes locked briefly...
It's Still a bit cliché, but it leaves the food out.
How do you mean, the subject header, which was just a silly post title, or the Cut text?
I don't often title my storie, so any suggestions are welcome.
HUGS
Phe
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Date: 2007-12-30 12:16 am (UTC)Also, I spotted a 'caramel' in there as well. (As I write this I'm having a good laugh at myself at how many times I described a male character as smelling like 'vanilla musk'.)
I'm not sure I have a good, sufficiently teasing suggestion. How about:
Hard light/Soft light: Rimmer invents a new way to drive Lister crazy.
(Mayhap a bit too cute.)
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Date: 2007-12-30 11:13 pm (UTC)There was a caramel yes, I'm not sure how describe Lister/Craig sexily as I don't actually fancy him.
I think I'll leave it as it stands, But I will keep a note of you comments for if/when I write another.
I think 'Something different is sufficiently teasing, as I said most of my fic don't have any titles, I'm moving up! :)
Thanks again for you comments.
HUGS
Phe
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Date: 2008-01-03 05:36 am (UTC)This made me giggle: "Smeeeeg Rimmeh! Where the hell did you learn that?" Lister asked as he glanced suspiciously in the direction of Rachels deflated form. :D
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Date: 2008-01-03 06:09 am (UTC)Yay, someone liked my Rachel line :D
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Date: 2008-01-03 06:13 am (UTC)