Fic: Recalled - R/L - R
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Title: Recalled
Authors:
roadstergal and
kahvi
Pairings: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: R, for this part (3 of 6).
Disclaimer: No, we don't own Red Dwarf or the boys, we just play around with them. We earn no money doing this.
A/N: Spoilers for everything up to and including Back To Reality.
Part 1 - Part 2.
He would show the smegger that he was not such a hoity-toity high-class bastard, after all.
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Pairings: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: R, for this part (3 of 6).
Disclaimer: No, we don't own Red Dwarf or the boys, we just play around with them. We earn no money doing this.
A/N: Spoilers for everything up to and including Back To Reality.
Part 1 - Part 2.
He would show the smegger that he was not such a hoity-toity high-class bastard, after all.
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Date: 2006-10-11 11:28 am (UTC)Fetishists.
"Hey, that hair was the only thing good about me in..."
Mmm… so pretty.
The only bad thing had been that mass murderer detail.
Yup. Just that eensy-weensy detail…
Lister wanted to suck him? It was perverted, even for Lister! A little precome started to seep out of his erection.
Perfect. It sums up Rimmer’s denial so very well – denial that you actually start to resolve! That’s what I love about your fics – both the gesalt stuff, and your individual works – is that you don’t just ignore awkward things like, y’know, characterization. Also, you write good almost-sex. This whole scene was hawt.
Gods, and then the whole ‘Rimmer is neurotic’ bit – it just fit him so well.
until Kryten came over with a deadpan look to ask him, in forcedly calm tones, whether he was absolutely certain where he'd parked the ship?
*snort* Nice tie-in with the show!
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Date: 2006-10-11 12:56 pm (UTC)Thank you! As far as I'm concerned though, the characterization is the fun part! Erm. That, and the sex. ;) And yes, hawt sexness. *fans self*
We are canon's bitches.
Thanks again for the lovely feedback!
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Date: 2006-10-12 03:46 am (UTC)Heh, I think Kat said it well - canon's bitches. No Rimmer without neuroses and hangups and rude bravado!
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Date: 2006-10-11 08:22 pm (UTC)- sbdlksdblskgbsögksbögksnf AGH! I kind of understand Rimmer and am in many ways like him (minus the worry of the almost-incest) but. Agh, so frustrating!
All the aghs and guhs aside, this continues being a vey good fic :)
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Date: 2006-10-12 03:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-10-12 07:07 am (UTC)'Tis very frustrating, but I have a feeling things will work out in the end. ;) Glad you're enjoying it still, thanks for feeding back!
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Date: 2006-10-11 08:49 pm (UTC)He tried to speak, but was unsteady on his feet; he clutched at the equally unsteady chair, trying to make sense of his even more unsteady thought processes
Great line (and imagery). The last line was a killer.
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Date: 2006-10-12 03:48 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-10-12 07:11 am (UTC)Thank you - that was one of mine. :) The last line was mine too, but
Thank you for feeding back!