Love & Jealousy

[felineranger.livejournal.com]

*Clears throat* Ahem...Feel a bit silly about this but would like to tell anyone who's interested that my fic Love & Jealousy which was given up for dead the best part of two years ago has been revitalised.  The 17-part sequel to Love & Friendship is finished and available in the files section of the Yahoo RDSS.  If anyone cannot view the files there then I will post here on request (she says optimistically)...

Comments

Some thoughts

[typhonblue.livejournal.com]

I'd go for broke. If you haven't posted it on LJ already, post the whole thing here because--unless you have it up on a site--no one will be able to access it. If you've already posted it on LJ maybe having a post with a link to all your previous posted chapters would be a good idea? (I'm not a mod here so don't quote me.)

Although I would suggest combining some of your chapters into one because they are fairly short. That might help your feelings of 'swamping' the site.

BTW, if you're interested I have concrit on your work. I like the complete absence of weirdness v. much.

Re: Some thoughts

[felineranger.livejournal.com]

I always welcome concrit!

Re: Some thoughts

[(Anonymous)]

Sorry for taking so long! (Got swamped by life.)

I was thinking, as I read the final few chapters, that Lister was acting a bit too much like a woman. The scene where he gets p'od at Rimmer and locks himself in their quarters twigged 'female' for me. I think Lister would be more likely to confront someone who was infuriating him rather then running away from them.

Otherwise it was good. :)

Re: Some thoughts

[typhonblue.livejournal.com]

Ooops... the above post was me. :P