Love & Jealousy
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*Clears throat* Ahem...Feel a bit silly about this but would like to tell anyone who's interested that my fic Love & Jealousy which was given up for dead the best part of two years ago has been revitalised. The 17-part sequel to Love & Friendship is finished and available in the files section of the Yahoo RDSS. If anyone cannot view the files there then I will post here on request (she says optimistically)...
Hello!
Date: 2008-02-08 01:11 am (UTC)So far it's really good. I like that its exploring Lister's desire for normalcy in the face of all the weirdness he's been through.
You have my vote for putting it up here, for what it's worth.
And I know all about the embarrassment. 0_0 I did pretty much the same thing too. (1 year hiatus.)
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Date: 2008-02-08 02:42 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-08 11:39 am (UTC)Some thoughts
Date: 2008-02-08 07:40 pm (UTC)Although I would suggest combining some of your chapters into one because they are fairly short. That might help your feelings of 'swamping' the site.
BTW, if you're interested I have concrit on your work. I like the complete absence of weirdness v. much.
Re: Some thoughts
Date: 2008-02-09 10:06 am (UTC)Re: Some thoughts
Date: 2008-02-29 02:19 am (UTC)I was thinking, as I read the final few chapters, that Lister was acting a bit too much like a woman. The scene where he gets p'od at Rimmer and locks himself in their quarters twigged 'female' for me. I think Lister would be more likely to confront someone who was infuriating him rather then running away from them.
Otherwise it was good. :)
Re: Some thoughts
Date: 2008-02-29 02:19 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-08 09:52 pm (UTC)Wonderful ending by the way pet, :D