[identity profile] felineranger.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] reddwarfslash
Another two chapters added!

http://archiveofourown.org/works/2408453/chapters/5602397

Chapter 9 contains a line that made me roar with laughter when I read back over what I'd written and should probably qualify for a mention on wtf.fanfiction. Bonus points if you can guess which one :-)

Date: 2014-10-27 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lordvalerymimes.livejournal.com
Oh smeg, what a cliff-hanger ending! You are cruel! :D

Date: 2014-10-27 03:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rosecathy1.livejournal.com
Omg no no no no no no no no no no no no

(Was the line "[....] take more than a fucking machine to smooth things over"?)

Date: 2014-10-27 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janamelie.livejournal.com
I thought it had to be the fucking machine! And I'm wondering wth one of those would look like... :o

This is such a wicked but enticing cliffhanger. I hope the culprit doesn't turn out to be who I suspect it could be.

I know you were considering a sequel before I wrote "Trouble In Paradise", but I'm delighted at how it's fed into this. Vero also deserves credit for having the idea of porn star Howard to start with. :)

Date: 2014-10-28 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com
I've seen those machines ... it's basically a dildo on the end of a long rod and a motor powers it to go back and forth while you balance or lie upon a padded thing.

Date: 2014-10-28 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janamelie.livejournal.com
The mind boggles. ;)

Date: 2014-10-27 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com
I have a hypothesis about who arranged the cliffhanger incident (so as not to spoil others) and why - and how they did it - but I don't want to say in case it ruins the next chapter. :-)
Edited Date: 2014-10-27 04:43 pm (UTC)

Date: 2014-10-27 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janamelie.livejournal.com
I have one too (maybe the same) but I'm actually hoping it turns out to be the surface explanation because the slightly less obvious one would be pretty unforgivable. :o

Or it could be something neither of us have thought of.

Date: 2014-10-27 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rosecathy1.livejournal.com
I'm hoping the same thing. :/

Date: 2014-10-28 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lordvalerymimes.livejournal.com
I think we might all be on the same track here. But I could be wrong! I can be thick at times. :D

I will be champing on the bit, waiting to see what happens next!

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