Fic - Green. R/L and A/L implications.
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I couldn't read Kahvi's wonderful Leave It To Spanners and not do this.
I don't like getting into Ace's head; I don't like the guy. ;) Concrit always welcome.
It follows:
Bongo.
Leave It To Spanners.
Dear lord, what had he been thinking?
I don't like getting into Ace's head; I don't like the guy. ;) Concrit always welcome.
It follows:
Bongo.
Leave It To Spanners.
Dear lord, what had he been thinking?
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Date: 2006-04-14 09:28 pm (UTC)If Skipper could resist the magnificent specimen of manhood that was Captain Arnold Rimmer, what chance did this pathetic little neurotic maggot think he had? - I like this line a lot - it seems to be both Ace and Arnold at the same time, but isn't he always referred to as 'Commander Rimmer'?
I somehow have a very vivid idea of what Rhonda's like - which is quite amazing for someone only in one sentence.
Aww, lovely ending, and some great details of exactly how and where Ace and Spanners touched each other. :)
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Date: 2006-04-14 09:37 pm (UTC)Heh - I went to college with her. She's a sweetie. That's not her name, of course. :D
Thanks for the feedback!
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Date: 2006-04-15 01:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-04-16 07:12 pm (UTC)