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[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Authors: kahvi/roadstergal
Title: Catcall, Part 2
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Oh, if we only owned the characters. Or made any money off of them. But we don't.
Notes: The second installment of the story - if you have not yet read the first part, go do that before you read this part. Will Rimmer and Lister escape? Will they shag? Does Rimmer have the same underinflated notion of 'shag' as he does of 'snog?' Will he overcome his neuroses? Oh, never mind that last one - we know he won't. Set just after Legion. Concrit makes us happy!

Just ‘meeoaarrrouuaaaurgh.’

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[jargonelle.livejournal.com]

One comment: Too many 'n's in abandoned, I think. Somewhere in an abandonned Cat city, on a planetoid the universe had sensibly forgotten about, two men stood, very still, in a very small house that was called a Room.

Now:

Rimmer sighed and put his kit below ‘trapped in a dark room’ and ‘painful shoulder’ on his list of things to worry about. - hee!

There were no theme parks on Io – no room for such frivolity on an outpost moon – so Rimmer had only been to one, on Mimas, as an adult. He had bought a ticket to a rollercoaster, and the whole time that it had slowly ratcheted upwards, he had an ice-cold feeling in the pit of his stomach, not sure if he would be able to take it. An oddly similar cold feeling was growing in him at this moment. Awww....

"Yeah. Best get our kit on then, hadn't we?" He didn’t feel like himself. He felt like a bad photocopy of himself that someone had crumpled up and thrown in a bin somewhere. Yeah, he was an optimist, but he needed something to go on. Some sign that Rimmer was with him in this. He felt suddenly very alone. That's sad, yet lovely.

The vibrations in the door stopped, and for a moment, all was quiet. Almost as an anti-climax, the door opened... inwards. - Hee!

Of course I could quote much more of this, but I don't think I need to since you guys were the ones who wrote it!

It was great fun, and seriously touching at times. Yay!

And the sex... well... needs no comment. *grins*

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

D'oh! Fixed.

Ja, that photocopy bit just made me... sad, but touched, when it came back.

Glad you liked it! Thanks for the feedback!

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Whoops - that was one of mine! Written in too much of a hurry. Thanks for pointing it out!

Lister got into a weird mood. I think it was all a little too much to process for them both. Poor things. I loved the rollercoaster analogy - partly because I've never been on one myself. I'm too scared; hence I could relate. (Wait; does that mean I'm more of a coward than Rimmer??)

Glad you enjoyed it! :D