Fic: Worlds. PG. R/L, implications of R/L, implications of R/L.

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

A post-Stoke Me A Clipper fic. Spoilers up through there.
Concrit always appreciated, especially in this one for voice and pacing. I find it so much easier to write Rimmer as smug bastard/git, and I'm never quite sure how to evolve his voice as Ace.

My name is Arnold, you batty machine.

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[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Yes, that was not happy... :( But you know how I feel about SMAC!

I remember reading The Adventure Of The Blue Carbuncle way back when, and thinking "What the hell?" I had to look it up to realize it was a gemstone once...

Yes, the second death. Again, something in the show that struck me as horribly sad, and was not gone into by the writers.

That ship's computer also struck me as a little horrifying. She coos over every Ace, but she appears to coo over every Ace identically, paying no mind to the fact that they're dying and being replaced.

Oh, we know every Arn wants every Lister in every dimension - and it must have just killed this one (so to speak) to see the Lister in his dimension pining after Ace. :p

[kahvi.livejournal.com]

Of course - the blue hair! Hah; didn't catch that one. Nice. ;)

I felt quite sorry for this Lister too, I'm not sure why. Well, there's the fact that Ace basically took advantage of him. :/

Guh - I'm trying to make my response-story (so to speak) balance between too depressing and too sappy. It did start out as "Too Much" and ended up as "Home", so I think it's going in the right direction. Might post soon, because I need to get it out of my system!

[roadstergal.livejournal.com]

Oh, I agree - I wanted Arn to say that outright, because I think it is indeed wrong to just take advantage of that Ace position, and then to run off and not tell him the whole Ace story. It was unfair to that dimension's Lister, and it was unfair to that dimension's Rimmer, as well.

*eagerly awaits*